I think that if I made a modern themed Christmas carol I think that that it will be set somewhere where there is a lot of businesses such as bank because over at bank there might be someone that cares about money more than family so I think that bank will be a good setting. I also think that the person that could be someone like scrooge could be a young business man because nowadays young men care about money more than old men so I think that a young business man will be a good character. I also think that it should be set on a very snowy something like a small blizzard to show how the young business man is feeling inside and is really stone hearted and to show that he doesn’t care about anything except money and is very stingy with it. the difference between scrooge and my character is that my character spends time at Christmas with his family(but is divorced) spends no money on his family he makes his wife do all the work and he earns money and keeps it to him self to spend it on alcohol and spend time with friends. scrooge is a man that hates Christmas and has no family and friends. my character might sound nice but spends no money are quality time with his family which he will miss and he is either at work or out with his mates getting drunk.

the young business man will live in a apartment instead of inside a Victorian house this apartment will be near west end and is really posh. the young business man has a partner who is old and humble and cares for everyone else this man is going to be Muslim to show that not all Muslims can be bad and only certain people are. this man cares for the young business man and wants him to enjoy life and spend time with his family even if they are divorced and not to spend all of it at work.

the ghosts in my story will be how he is and how he could’ve been if he put family first one of the ghost these ghost will change the young business man and put him right and not to be selfish. this is what my story will be about.