Month: November 2016

Winter swans and when we two parted

I would compare when we two parted with the winter swans because they are both to do with a relationship and have rain involved In it that is why I think these two poems are comparable

To key points of the poems is

Relationship because they both are about a relationship that might be falling apart

Negative tone because in when we r two parted has a negative tone to it

A very gloomy scene in both because they are both raining and have a very depressing feeling to it

and both of them have a something to do with both of the characters and about their story

 

 

 

 

 

Winter swans questions


The effect of pathetic fallacy is that it is giving giving the weather human attributes this makes us feel that they are talking about humans

The central metaphor is

 

The last stanza is about the 2 swans holding hands

Sonnet 29

A metaphor in this poem is “my thoughts do twine and bud about thee,as wild vines about a tree. this is a metaphor because she is saying that her thoughts are fighting her because they are around her and maybe she feels that she is trapped in her thoughts like a tree Is trapped with vines.

Another language technique used in this sonnet is enjourment

Exam practice

A stormy day at the village it was raining like never before it was like the gods were angry at us for doing something wrong.

On day I was going to the farm to check if any foxes have eaten the cows or sheep over night when I saw the abandoned train tracks being usedone again for a mysterious reason amd the waves were pushing against the train like they were trying to stop it from going any further. but the train kept moving on, this was happening everyday and it will only get stormy when the train is about to approach the village, could the train ahve something to do with the storm.